Assignment #11-10

• In my previous essays now that i look back at, I noticed that I tend to use the word "They" so much that myself couldn't go on reading my own paper. For example i use, "They are" or "they always", "they" and plenty of other ones. Using this word more than once i every paragraph makes me look like i don't know who i'm writing about or what. I also seem to go off topic and start to talk about something else irrelevant to the topic i should originally be talking about. Those are the two most important things i think i should really build up my strength in and hopefully my papers in the end will come back with a good grade.