My Final paper indeed does look a bit more different from my first draft. There is more explaining and more detail that i had to write from the comments my peer had wrote. Many revisions were made, the organization i had before was not too organized but i managed to make it more understanding. After revising my paper i was able to see the errors I wrote. When I read over them i would think to myself " Did i really write that?" Now with the peer review i am able to fix my essay into a better one. Peer Review is when a student or classmate proof reads your paper and fixes errors that you made and explains to you ways you can enhance your paper and make it better than the first draft. I think my introduction is the strongest part of my paper. The body would be the second strongest. Reason why is because i feel like i have a good attention grabber. and i feel like i explained well in my intro what my essay will be about.
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