Assignment #7 -10

Well first  would like to say that this class is pretty difficult for me to understand. I do enjoy the whole blogging idea but i have been having trouble  with writing the essays and understanding the assignments. i complete them but im never sure if im doing them right. So i would like for the assignments to be cutted down into more clear  and understandable details. My writing process has changed for the better since i first started this semester. It has improved in some ways but i know that i can improve even more. I do participate more in this class than anyother class i have. Because i am determined to learn more. i feel like if i participate more in class i will understand the assignments coming up up and i try to understand. Some words that are used in this class i am not familiar with and i think thats the reason why i get lost half way into class. Other than that i do not have any problem with this class and i do look forward to go go through it the entire semester.

Assignment #6 -10

My ad analysis is different from my literacy narrative. I use a different way to write my ad analysis this time. In my literacy narrative I softly went into the subject of how i learned to speak English. In my ad analysis i jumped right into the subject getting to the point of the essay. These choices do affect my writing because i am using different ways to write my papers.

Assignment #5 - 10

Purpose- is to get young married women to take their vitamins to stay active during cleaning at home and keep her happy.
Audience- is young married women.
Tone- is a type of Energized, its positive and strong.
Genre- is mostly Visual and has Text on the advertisement.
Media- the media is from the 1930's and has a type of Drawn photo.
Context- has big context to try to  get the message out loud and clear.

Assignment 4

My Final paper indeed does look a bit more different from my first draft. There is more explaining and more detail that i had to write from the comments my peer had wrote. Many revisions were made, the organization i had before was not too organized but i managed to make it more understanding. After revising my paper i was able to see the errors I wrote. When I read over them i would think to myself " Did i really write that?" Now with the peer review i am able to fix my essay into a better one. Peer Review is when a student or classmate proof reads your paper and fixes errors that you made and explains to you ways you can enhance your paper and make it better than the first draft. I think my introduction is the strongest part of my paper. The body would be the second strongest. Reason why is because i feel like i have a good attention grabber. and i feel like i explained well in my intro what my essay will be about.