Assignment#13 -10

I analyzed " Why Marijuana should be legalized". While analyzing my peers essay i noticed that it had a confident tone to it. The narrator was really informed about his topic and knew what he was talking about. He gave strong points in the essay and made me go through mines to see if i had any strong statements that i should add. I learned from analyzing this essay because it showed me how to also use some of my knowledge in it and to know how to back up your points.

Assignment #12-10

• The most compelling evidence that i wrote on my paper is that when turning the age of 18 we are considered adults. We are given the right to vote that can make change, we are given the legal right to buy cigarettes, we have the ability to serve on juries, we have the ability to get married, and even to serve our country and join the military and we cannot have the right to drink an alcoholic beverage at 18. We are pretty mature by the time we hit 18 because not only are we graduating high school but are getting ready to start our first year in college.